I have this reoccurring dream wherein I wake up, prepare for school–dressing nattily in a blue suit with a red tie and a black felt derby, spats–pick-up my antique leather satchel and ebony walking stick and launch through the front door…only to find that I am falling, falling, falling to the street below. Then I am suddenly standing in class in my underwear–no lesson-plan, their cruel laughter and a shrieking school-bell pounding my head. Then I wake, bathed in sweat, kill the alarm, prepare for school–dressing nattily in derby and spats–launching myself into the cold urban twilight without cares or plans–only possibility.
We had a teacher who wore spats. Our laughter was genuine though.
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I liked this. Just the right ending for it.
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Nice! In most of my dreams, I have no shoes and I am lost. Dreams are weird. now where are my shoes??????
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Very nice one!
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I hope you were wearing clean underwear!
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Love it, Quite the dressy gentleman of old thou art. Love the repeat… gotta hate those repetitive nightmares.
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Would this be nightmare turned daymare? Teachers usually have weird dreams, most occurring the week leading up to the first day of school. I know I sure have!
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I like the end beat. Well done.
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Sounds like an odd dream.
The end sentence creates wonderful images in my mind (launching myself into the cold urban twilight without cares or plans–only possibility).
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I like to end and begin my day with possibilities.
Tracey
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I liked this! But I don’t know what spats are.
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http://www.dynamitegun.com/Bugout/Pictures/Remy's%20Bag/SpatsSmall.jpg
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Thank you for the picture! They are pretty cool! No?
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The poor teacher seems to be caught in a loop of dreams and reality. He should throw his spats away and break up the routine. It’s a great story.
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This is great. I’ve been feeling uninspired lately, but this is my picture and seeing the way others respond is helping. Thank you! 🙂
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I enjoyed your humorous dream and the ending was fantastic.
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I love that he’s entering the ‘urban twilight’. Anything’s possible out there. What a flight of fancy you’ve written. Most enjoyable.
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Dear Larry,
One of the best takes not he prompt this week. Perfectly written and flawlessly imagined. Well done.
Aloha,
Doug
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I really enjoyed reading this – as a former teacher myself and because of the way you’ve crafted it. I love the repeat of the dream and the panicky thought of having no lesson plan! The attire was a bit OTT for school (haha) but suited the writing style well. Excellent final two words. 🙂
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Dear Larry,
I’m late getting around, as you can tell. Only a week behind. 😉 Your vocal adds so much to this well-written piece. I’m so glad I didn’t miss out on it.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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